my story is about a kid that wanted to be a professional baseball player and he got to be one.
The homerun of tedy.wmv
Hi Daschel Very good story. Do you like to play baseball yourself? If you do play baseball what team do you play for? Do you have a favourite team?
I like how you use lots of different pictures. Also i like how you spoke during the story.
This isn’t a big deal but you spelt credits wrong, beside that very good story.
Hello my name is Jade and I’m from Australia. Questions-: 1. Who’s Tedy? 2. Do you like Baseball? 3. Where did you get your idea for your story from?
Comment-: 1. I enjoyed watching your story. 2. Your pictures were good.
I would suggest that you explain who tedy is.
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November 8th, 2006 at 10:36 am
Hi Daschel
Very good story.
Do you like to play baseball yourself?
If you do play baseball what team do you play for?
Do you have a favourite team?
I like how you use lots of different pictures.
Also i like how you spoke during the story.
This isn’t a big deal but you spelt credits wrong, beside that very good story.
November 8th, 2006 at 10:45 am
Hello my name is Jade and I’m from Australia.
Questions-:
1. Who’s Tedy?
2. Do you like Baseball?
3. Where did you get your idea for your story from?
Comment-:
1. I enjoyed watching your story.
2. Your pictures were good.
I would suggest that you explain who tedy is.